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Me and my family got into the family van. It was a pretty old van made back in the 60s. I still can't believe it still runs. My dad back out of the drive way and we were on are way to wherever. I ask my dad to turn on the radio and he turns it to the rock station. Someone new band was playing a terrible song. Then it began to rain really hard. My dad turned on the windshield wipers , but it still seem like he was having trouble seeing. " Wow i never seen it rain this hard. Have you mom?" My mom didnt answer she seem focused on something. What she was focused on i don't know there was nothing to look at , but tress and the rain. Then something hit our car. The car starts to swerve right to left. My dad was having trouble controlling the car.





I looked out the window to see what might of hit our car. But there wasn't anything there. Then something started thumping on the roof of the van. " I got your now!!!! You can't escape me!!!!" screamed gasping voice. the person starts pounding on the roof and rips the top open. I looked into his yellow eyes. He had wrinkling face with pointy ears and Grey hair in a pointy tail.





" Come here my pretty. Come to Suther Come here." He reached out from the top of the car to grasp me. I start to scream. My mom unbuckles her seat belt and climbs to the back. She holds onto his arm not letting go. " You keep your filthy hand off my Emily. You filthy animal!!!" She screamed. And with great strenght she rips off the guy arm. Green blood starts to ooze out of his missing arm.





He screams was terrible. It sound like he was dying. " You ***** you will pay for that!" He cursed.





My mom looks at me she seemed pissed . Then she saw how scared i was and took a deep breath and start to smile. " You ok Emily?" I answer with a nod. She nods back and looks up. Suther was still cursing and screaming about his missing arm.





My mom looked at me and said " Baby do me a favor. " She picks up these huge headphones from the floor of the car. " Put these on your head now ok sweety." I do as i'm told. She takes a deep breath and Screams at the top of her lungs. But this scream was different than an average scream. When she screamed you could see big waves coming out of her mouth. Suther


fell down covering is ears. My mom climbs up on the roof of the car. She looks at him with anger in her eyes. " This is the death of you Suther now die!!!" She takes another deep breath and screams at his head. The sound was to strong for him. And His head explodes and his band goes limp and falls. my mom picks him up and throws him off the roof and climbs back in.She gets back in the front seat and buckles up. My dad looks at me and her " So you wants Wendys?"

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Why would anyone bother to read ALL that,,,I would get a book? your first line should have been ,,,,My family and I,,,,,,sorry don't mean to be picky
Reply:did this seriously happen???
Reply:what?
Reply:Is this an April Fool's joke a day early?





If not, it's not bad. Need to do a spell and grammar check though.
Reply:It is alright I guess. It has a few grammar mistake though.
Reply:Intersting story. It's ok, not the best story i heard though
Reply:????????????????????
Reply:Good story.



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